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Wednesday, December 08, 2004

9.5 hours ago

Tired.
Eyes puffy from saline streams
35 mph, no other cars in sight

Shortcomings admitted
Inadequacy noted
Heart poured out
Fears broke the night silence

The Almighty the solo audience

Pride
Holding on ….now a loosening grip….
letting
go.

His peace engulfs
His acceptance overwhelms
Trusting.
Renewed.


4 whatevers:

Philio said...

wow. I really enjoy your writing. You should put this kind of stuff together and publish it.

darker than silence said...

that is beautiful.

Mike said...

hi kristi, it is good to see you posting again. this is a very beautiful piece. i love poetry. you captured what i have been trying to say all week: we need God. we cannot do this alone. He wants to give us peace. thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings so openly. it is an inspiration.

PKD said...

I've never seen a night so long,
When time goes crawling by,
The moon just went behind a cloud,
To hide its face and cry